T1+Persuade

//__**Monday 14 March 2011**__// L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics


 * Monday 14 March 2011**

    Tauranga Intermediate30 18th AvenueTauranga Dear Mr Diver I am writing to you because I would like you to continue to give us extended morning teas on Fridays. The extended morning tea last Friday was really cool and we would like to have it again. If you let us have extended morning teas every Friday the whole school would run strait back to class and wait out side. Giving us extended morning tea would give us more fresh air and it would allow us to have more P.E. If we had an extended morning tea the teachers would have longer time to mark our work so that they don't have to do it when were in class, and they would also get a little bit more time away from the the kids. If you were a kid Wouldn't you want to have an extended morning tea every friday?

 Mr Diver in conclusion I belive that 2011 would be better if we could have extended morning teas every Friday for the rest of the year.   